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Ouuuuh! You're forgiven! I love love this piece!

Zena and Fidel are a thing 🌚

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I've left handed the rest of the narrative over to you😂. Thanks for your forgiveness, understanding and love for this piece. You rock!💓

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Thr story makes up for the lateness. You're forgiven. 😌

Also, the suspense in the beginning part? I thought she'd accept his proposal. 🥺😩😩

Well, thank you, Adebola, for this story. 🤗

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Thank you for reading, Faithyyyy. I'm glad I made up for the lateness 🥹. Suspense yen wa necestri, you know😂

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😂😂😂

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I like that there's a Fidel!!!! Please, leave me, I love what I love😫😂😂

Welldone, my friend!! You wounded me with suspense and gave me ice-cream at the end🥹🥹🥹. You are forgiven ❤️❤️

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I like that there's a Fidel, too! The mix of suspense and ice-cream is fun, don't you think?😅 Thank you my love. 💛

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I can't wait to read the chemistry between Zena and Fidel🤭

You're forgiven😊

Well done and I love it ♥️ 😩

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The rest of the chemistry will be in your mind o😂. That's the end of the story lol. Thank you for reading, Tofunmi💛

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That can't be the end😩

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I cant imagine what zena would have been going through if she didnt find solace in God

Jumoke getting married before her.. Even with the pressure of getting married, she was still able to make the right decision by leaving Emeka.

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I know right. Some of these pressures, we're the ones who place them on ourselves. Thank you for reading, Chidinma. Shout out to your supportive heart for downloading this app because of Quality time, too. 🥹💛

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Quality time deserves all the attention it’s getting. What you do here is so beautiful. I love the story, the relatable characters and how it all points back to Jesus

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One of my favourite readers!!! I ALWAYS look forward to your feedbacks. Thank you so much for reading. God be praised always!

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This really blessed me....

The part where she was able to journey back to God in her mind and shake off that "gnawing feeling of dissatisfaction, disappointment, the ways and hows" and found peace again.

Thank you Adebola for this piece.

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Thank you for reading, Happiness! I'm glad this blessed you 💛.

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Wow. This was beautiful ❤️

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This is so so so so good, omggg!

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I love Fidel already, ahn ahn, see rizz na. I love it. I am already a fan.🤭 Abeg, no Emeka drama.😭 The emeka already looks like a big issue at the beginning of the story.

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😂😂😂😂

Bimbo and her intriguing analysis! Make someone come rizZ me like that abeg. Yeah, Emeka was a lot! Thankfully Zena moved past everything.

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I am so late, I am just catching up now.

But my goodness... Fiction was definitely made for you! These are amazing! :)

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Thank you, Valencia. 💛

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Just discovered your Substack and you’re such an excellent writer. I enjoyed reading this so much. More power to your elbows…or your fingers.😄

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Oh, my! This means a lot–elbow or fingers, all join😂. Thank you so much ☺️💛

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Adebola Adebs,

I enjoyed reading it.

Congratulations on 400 subscribers. Can wait for you to hit 1k🥳

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Thank you for reading, my sweet! Your support from the very beginning has been mind blowing 🥹💛

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For real??? No part 2😭😭😩😩😩

Whyyyyyy???? I want to see what God would do with this two.

A very very beautiful story ❤️

God gives us the best when we leave the very things we think we cannot do without

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I like this comment. "God gives us the best when we leave the very things we think we cannot do without " hmm!

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Continue part 2 in your mind 😂. Thank you so much, my darling 💛

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